AICE Media Studies AS- Laud, R

Although I did not receive many negative criticisms about my magazine, I decided to change what had been suggested that I change by my peers. The first thing I put my focus on was my content page. Before I had turned in my first draft of my project, I was already not satisfied with the result of the page. Something about it simply did not look correct and it did not blend in with the rest of the magazine. This was also the only big thing that was suggested to be changed. I decided to tackle the background first. Originally, I had a simple purple to black gradient as the background that I decided was too plain and uninteresting. I had considered putting photography in the background of the content page, but decided against it as it would be hard to read the text on top and it would be too distracting for the reader. Instead, I settled on creating a similar background to my main article, which had a unique pattern. To come up with the color scheme I decided to just use the images I had o...

This week I shared my project with my class for them to critique and give me any changes that they think would be necessary. The comments that were made about my ma gazine were mostly positive. There were many comments about how people appreciated the commitment to the color scheme that was even incorporated in the photography in the  magazine . My classmates also said they liked how I framed my text  in my main article and table of contents with a transparent but dark rectangle.  However, even though the comments about my magazine were mostly positive, there were a couple of suggestions. Firstly, it was suggested that I changed the color of one of the  lines of text on my cover to incorporate the colors that were shown throughout the rest of the text on the cover. Secondly, it was suggested that I change my table of contents because something about it just seemed off, which I agreed with. In order to imp rove my magazine, I will be changing  both of these ...